CONTENT/內容
Are you answering the actual question given in the prompt?
你是否回答了文書寫作要求中所提出的問題?
Have you been sincere and personal?
你的寫作是否是誠懇的、個人化的?
Are you showing rather than telling?
你是否時刻注意要「展示」而非「空談」?
Does your introduction grab the reader's attention?
你的開頭是否足夠具有吸引力?
Does your essay contain a high level of detail and concrete evidence?
你的文書是否具備充分的細節描述與具體事例?
Have you avoided unsubstantiated claims?
你是否避免了不夠具有說服力的論斷?
Do you offer specific,personal insights rather than trite generalizations and cliche?s?
你是否表達了獨特的個人觀點，而非常見的陳詞濫調?
Do you avoid summarizing information that can be found elsewhere on your application?
你是否避免了重復已經在其他申請材料中出現過的信息?
Will your essay make you stand out?
你的文書是否足以令你脫穎而出?
STRUCTURE/結構
Can you identify an overarching theme?Have you articulated that theme in the essay?
你的文書是否有一個能夠支配全文的主旨?你是否明確而有力地闡釋了這一主旨?
Does your theme have multiple layers and genuine depth?
你的主旨是否具備層層遞進的特點和深度?
Do you have a reason for placing every paragraph where it is?
你的每一個段落是否經過了合理的安排?
Do your paragraphs flow smoothly?Are there any gaps or jumps?
你的行文是否足夠流暢?上下文之間是否有跳躍或無法銜接之處?
Does each point build upon previous points,or does your essay sound like a list?
你的每一個要點是否是基于前文的基礎之上的?還是說你的文書看起來就像在單純地列舉?
Is the essay clear and coherent?Have you strengthened its impact by using the optimal structure?
你的文書是否做到了清晰且連貫?你所采用的結構是否最大化地幫助你表達了你的想法?
STYLE/風格
Have you achieved a simple,straightforward style?
你是否做到了簡單直接的表達?
Have you varied your sentence constructions?
你的句子是否采用了富于變化的表達方式?
Have you avoided unnecessarily fancy vocabulary?
你是否避免了使用華而不實的詞匯?
Have you achieved active writing through the use of strong verbs?
你是否更多地通過有力的動詞來實現生動的表達?
Have you avoided overusing adjectives and adverbs?
你是否做到了避免過度地使用形容詞或副詞?
Is your tone conversational,rather than too casual or too formal?
你的文書是否像說話般娓娓道來，而沒有過于正式或過于隨意?
Have you conveyed confidence,enthusiasm,and passion?
你的文書是否有效地傳達出了自信、積極與熱情?
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